When I strive to achieve some of my goals
You are there in the shadows
When I stumble or fall
You are there to help me up
When a poem is written
You are there for such inspiration
When work takes me away from you
You are there at home
When I am alone
You are in my thoughts
Then I know I will never be alone
Because
You are there
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Written September 23rd, 2004
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Wow. This says so much in so few words. Wonderfully written with true love and devotion. You truly are talented when it comes to writing from the heart. Well done.
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ohhhhh *sigh* thats it lol im done reading you tonight, making me long for soemthing that is so hard to find. This is definately a rare thing these days but when you have, best not ever let it go.
damn these are good i am afraid to read your erotica lol...oh but i will lol
well done once again...
~~Tory~~
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Such a love is so rare it is to be appreciated as you do with her ... what a beautiful gift to give and recieve ...
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i love how you have her there for you in everything that you do.... and you being there for her would mean the world too... great write in here
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It is a very reassuring thought not to feel alone, indeed it is a wonderful feeling, as the feeling itself can stretch to beyond a girlfriend or boyfriend, but to just plain friend.
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I love this poem. I can find nothing to fault it. Well done and continue the great work.
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FANTASTIC
I love this poem, i can relate to this so well. I read this and it reminds me of all the times my husband has told me the very things you write about. It is an awsome feeling to have that special someone there for you. Is it not?
Kathy
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Such truth in this one, which I can also relate too when I'm away from my honey. She is the muses which sparks my passions.
Beautifully captured!
peace
doug
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i need this right now thank u
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It's wonderful to know that they are there for you ED isn't it, it's a wonderful feeling to know such a love, beautiful as always my friend-Jenn
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Very good
Wow. This is very nice and exactly what love is supposed to be like. A very good portrayal! -
Betcha She Loves It!!!
A beautiful write for one who is obviously also beautiful...I am glad you have someone special to be your inspiration & Heart, Sir...Love is crucial for survival...especially for a Poet...Lovely poem, Sir...well done!!! Wanda
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yourpoetrylover
poetic _soldier,wonderfull piece written here that shows ur depth of emotion to that special someone..its very sweet and simple ..and it's so amazing how few words can hold such a meaning..i love your poetry..its simply the best!!! -
This poem was written for someone very special to me. They encouraged me to write what’s in my heart. More importantly she opened my heart to feel so many wonderful things. Thanks for the comment. You are also so very special.
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great
aww great poem... who is it for??
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