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"Is It?"

Is it, cause I'm cool you wont talk to me?
Is it, cause I'm smart you don't like me at all?
Is it, cause I'm far away you forgot me?
Is it, cause I'm tough you won't mess with me?
Is it, cause I'm happy all the time you won't like me?
Is it, cause I'm beautiful you don't want to get to know me?
Is it, cause I'm good at something that your not you won't be my friend?
Is it, cause I have better things to do in life you won't hang with me?
Is it, cause I believe in God and go to church you don't?
Either way I'm know better than that so do you.
I'm just a girl who knows what she wants.
Don't try to be something that you ain't.
Don't lose yourself in life.
Be happy what you got.
Thank God for it all the time.

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Written October 1st, 2004

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  • Swingdancer01
    December 6, 2004
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    Hey girl I like your poem and i cant believe your going out with Chris still I haven't from you in forever. Well g2g t2ul xenia


  • The Sirk
    October 4, 2004
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    This is a song. It's called is it cos i'm cool. Isn't that classed as plagerism?


  • Lioness
    October 1, 2004
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    Hey Chickie,
    this is another good poem. Keep up the good work.
    Lovies Lots Always,
    Chea