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"I'll Always Be There"



In times of trouble,
In times of need,
If you are feeling SAD,
You can count on me.
I will give you a wink,
Until you smile,
give you a hug,
And stand by your side.
I'll be there for you till the end,
I'll always and forever, be your friend!

Author notes

This goes to all my cool friends. Love ya!
Written October 1st, 2004

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  • Lioness
    November 8, 2005
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    hola chica!
    que pasa? nunca agqi. Ok, I give up, i don't have spanish till next class, but I tries, you can't hold it agianst me. I like your poem. I completly inderstand and think you did a wonderful job. I'll talk to ya later.
    Lovies,
    Prima Chea

  • sheshe143
    October 1, 2004
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    so very sweet
    much enjoyed and thanx for sharing