My sweetheart my love is true
how could I live without you.
By your side I'll always stay
It could never be any other way.
You bring me happiness and love
It was destined from above.
it was part of Gods great plan
that you would always be my man.
Could I ever live without you?
No, for it would make me too blue.
your kisses bring me such bliss
so much love from just one kiss.
the gentle touch of your caress
leaves me breathless no less.
I love you with all my heart
I always have right from the start.
I will tell it to the stars and moon
to bring us together someday soon.
My love I am very happy and content
accept my love that I just sent
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Written October 1st, 2004
In a list
A contest entry
- Love and Sorrow by speedway babe.
300 points, ended October 3, 2004, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Beautiful
Jenne This is so romantic and beautiful. Excellent poem my aussie friend. I hope that if it was really to someone special, that they appreciate you in their lives.
Hugs
Jan -
Dear R, what would you like me to break?....Your legs, Arms, Fingers, Neck? you nane it and I'll oblige.
Jenn
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For God's sake jen, give us a break
R. -
very nice
To forget is not to love
to love is to live in you
to live is to live live
kisses and embrace ever
witnessing our togetherness in love!
love is so great ,therefore! -
Awww...this is so sweet. I used to feel that way about someone, but things changed. Oh well...I really enjoyed reading this. And also, thank you for the comment on my piece. I'm glad you liked it.
Until next time, blessed be!
~Wiccan Pisces~ -
5 stars *****
jenni..jenni.. dear friend.. this is great write..
.. well.. this time this kiss is to your write not to you.. 
... and thanks for using rhyme in this piece... ... dont try to get this kiss to.. it was to the rhyme used in this piece.. well, you are such a great writer when you use rhymes.. you rhyme it extremely well dear.. then i wonder why dont you rhyme your poems... well, rhyme in this poem takes the charm... and this write is full of emotions and deep feelings dear.. take cares and have a nice time dear.. just keep it up dear jenni. your humble little friend.. 
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.... - vic ( who else? )...
hey i forgot onething... .. this time they are to you.. thanks for sharing such a nice write dear..
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The contest have expired all ready i don`t thinkam invited to write this i thouhg u were the one who brougt it ut at frist
now i don`t think i can be in her with myown poem
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Thank you Abdul, why are you not going to enter this contest? you write beautifully my friend-Jenni
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I was unable to enter this conjtest and write mine i was happy to see this kind of poem it mean for u only right so dearing are the word , flaming talking and aspoiration u are alwauys going top n top
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