My friends, when they are sad
Makes me also feel sad.
I feel helpless, I want to help
I want them to always feel glad.
If I could help believe me I would
I only wish that I could,
If there was something I could do
To help them overcome feeling blue.
What can I do to help lovely people
That doesn't mind spending time with me,
God help us, and please help me
To help those that are close to me.
I wish that my life was easier
So that I could be a better friend,
To put my friend's souls at ease
To help and always be on hand.
But I'm a disease, an unwanted curse
That don't know anything but how to hurt
People that are dear to me
Because pain is all I know how to be.
Author notes
Written September 30th, 2004
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another good poem


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I noticed that this and the other poem was written 4 years ago. From reading your author's page, it seems like you've came a long way. Life can be so damn hard sometimes, but our words are the art of our pain. We become the great alchemist when channeling the overwhelming emotions. Sweet write.


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you are a true friend and that in its self is rare
this is a beautiful poem
i like it just like you wrote it no parts better than another


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i like it ... a lot... i flows well and has a good beat to it ... great jo
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The fact that you've written a piece about your friends is touching and this shows how lucky they are. its beautiful and a touching tribute. its natural emotion to feel pain wen someone close to you feels pain...
interesting
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