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Nocturnal thoughts

I need someone
SOmeone to drown in me
Someone who doesnt float
I need pure, unadulterated sex
followed by intensly crazy love
the worst kind
And you, you can give me intensely insane sex
you can make my body cry,shrink, grow, shrink, grow
But you cant fall in love the way I cant fall in love
and so we are similar creatures
and so we contrast
a negative fucking a negative
never reaching more than cold metal close to cold metal
repelled by each other
nature's divine balance
but I need to be needed
in the most obssessive way
My polar opposite
to have a sense of urgency that can only come with madness
a love virus infected with beauty
The cocavities in my hands to match the convexities in your heart
So I can trap you in my fist
the power of my palm

Author notes

I know this isnt much of a poem, I think I might try to write it over as a narrative, but Scrambling last night I managed to recover this from my thoughts.
Written September 30th, 2004

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  • SophiesCorner
    October 6, 2004
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    i don't know this girl anymore. the girl who wrote this. maybe this was always a part of her..or maybe it has been awaken with time. i used to know a romantic...so hoplessly romantic. she was naive...now she's getting cynical. which would you rather be? be whoever you are...and i am happy for you, just sad because i don't know this girl anymore-this was the girl i was going to grow old with because she knew exactly how to play with my hair and scratch my back when i was sad. i miss that girl. im jealous of everyone around you. can i steal you away?