A beautiful girl has stolen my heart,
I don't have a clue of what I must do.
Of all the girls, she's on top of my chart,
And I want to go and steal her heart too!
If only I knew how to do a thing,
I could tell her the feelings that I have.
I can always go up to her and sing,
But all she would do is look up and laugh.
I know she likes me, but don't want to say.
And I do like her more than she may think,
So I will find the words to talk someday.
That day came and my heart started to sink.
I told her I liked her and then I knelt,
And she told me exactly how she felt.
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Written January 21st, 2000
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a good piece of poetry penned, though it is a little short isn't it? though please tell me, how long should a poem be? as long as piece of string perhaps? or as short as the life we lead?
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this is soooo cute babe..i love it!
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Such a cute piece...
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All you should do is just tell her! This is such a sweet poem! wonderful, one that any woman would love to hear. Linda
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Awesome!
I love this poem. How did she feel? Not cool! You left me guessing.
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hahaha
That was the point, hahaha. Imagine if it were you. How would you answer?
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I love this poem the ending leaves me wondering and I like that great job ! good luck
Luv April M -
lol still=steal??
this kinda leaves a sadder ending... your heart did sink when she told you how she felt??
i hope this had a happy ending.
beautiful work though, so full of feeling -
oooo this is sooo cute! loved it
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how sweet and romantic. Good luck in the contest.
Prince.
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