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I Know

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Apparently, it was about transitions, feelings.

I know, you never loved me
I know, that you, you never loved me
I know, that you, you never cared for me
Yeah, quite the way, that I would want you to do.

I know, that you, you never liked me that much
But I know, that you, you possessed the velvet crush
And I want that, little crush, real bad.

Real bad:

Then we go down, then we sing to the ground
Then we feel like ourselves
Running down, timid wolves lie grazing
Sheep in the meadow, sheep in the meadow;
Then the hunter comes, he's got his sites set
On the wolf after sheep, the wolves after sheep
But I'm dressed up like the moisture in God's cup
Then they service me, would you like some tea?

And I know,
Yeah I know,
You never loved me that much
I know, that you, you never cared for me
Quite the way, that I would want you to do
But if you, wanted to see, me on my knees?
All you had to do was just say please,
from the start.

Because, I know, what you're thinking right now
I know, how you feel, I have been there
Drinking down by the creek
Where the poppies grow free
In the meadow with the sheep,
And the mushroom God, he's talking to me,
And I can see...
UFOs, and they know,
Just how I feel.

independentartistscompany.com/songs.aspx?SongID=3122&;ArtistID=9993

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Written September 30th, 2004

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  • ecrivain01
    July 9, 2006
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    Excellent write. Sometimes your dark poems are too dark for me to digest at one sitting, but this one works better that way. All in all, good job.

    I hope life is treating you better nowadays.


  • d a f f o d i l
    June 12, 2005
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    wow this was incredible horus8! your work is incredibly powerful! get it published damn you


  • masterblaster gold member
    June 12, 2005
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    Wonderful, stupendous, try Kenny Woodman or John Burgess at Apple, or Don Black,he was doing a lot with M.C.A. a few years back, this should go to number one.

  • Melissa Gayle gold member
    June 12, 2005
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    Fantastic!

  • the simulated life
    June 12, 2005
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    good

    nice, can't listen to the song right now.


  • Nyx Iscariot
    December 16, 2004
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    damn you, damn you and making me cry.


    =(

    one sided coins never were fun to play with.

    N...


  • Em
    October 28, 2004
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    No, I didn't know there was a link! But as I said the other one I listend to was fantastic.... I will try to find the link, coz i wanna listen, but I am blind so I may not find the link j/k!


  • horus8 gold member
    October 28, 2004
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    Did you click on the link and listen?


  • Em
    October 28, 2004
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    Yet another lyric done superbly.....very nice! So many of us can relate to what you write, your too talented! Again very nice. I would appluade but I ran out!
    ~Tina


  • horus8 gold member
    September 30, 2004
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    Did you click on the link and listen to the song?
    thanks for the kind words by the way.


  • xthexrealxme
    September 30, 2004
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    Meaningful!

    I have felt that way before and can also relate. Thank you for sharing this, I felt these feelings but definitly can't express myself as well as you. Great job. Wonderful.


  • SeptemberFaith
    September 30, 2004
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    Jeremi -

    I think that you did a very good job with this.

    You never loved me that much
    I know, that you, you never cared for me
    Quite the way, that I would want you to do
    But if you, wanted to see, me on my knees?
    All you had to do was just say please,
    from the start.

    I have felt that way before, I can relate to this very much. You have a talent not many possess


  • Annastacia
    September 30, 2004
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    I didn't read the fact that these were lyrics when I started, and I was thinking to myself halfway through this would be a great song. So I scrolled back up and what do you know...Lyrics. I think it flows well, and I like the way it is written. I am going to hit that link so I can listen to it and then I will come back to tell you what I think.
    Anna


  • horus8 gold member
    September 30, 2004
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    Likewise, thank you. How's the reed blowing, and Kung Fu these
    days? Going to that tournament in Vegas next month? My son is, he's very excited.


  • NurseChilly gold member
    September 30, 2004
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    Jeremi.. this is bloody fantastic.. both words and music blew me away hun.. rocked my lil' socks right off..
    Nicely done sir..

    ~GILL~xxx


  • September 30, 2004
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    fucking beautiful. My ears have been fucked up lately, so i havent bothered to listen to the music links yet. but i plan to just as sooon as i can unclog the buggers.

  • Nicole Hanna
    September 30, 2004
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    Mushroom gods. Very awesome. I wish my computer wasn't running in safe mode right now so that I could hear the clip you provided. Just the incentive I need to actually stop being lazy and reboot my harddrive. lol. Wonderful writing, and I imagine it's an even better song.


  • haikumonk gold member
    September 30, 2004
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    Just noticed all the trophies you have won. Damn, you are one talented poet. You crush people in the contests..... and, perfectly place the words to a moody music that really works well. I've dropped by your music many occassions and I suggest any reader noticing my comment here to do the same.

    Your work is top shelf.

    Take care,

    Don

  • crying in shame
    September 30, 2004
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    hahaha i have a poem called i know!! wow wel this one showed a lot of emotions and feelings and it was written well...flowed nice and everything fitted well...strange yet very very good well done keep up the good work!!!
    later days

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