Illusive as the moment that
drifts in and drifts out
Impetuous as a small child
who touches everything
Envious as someone with
nothing needing everything
Tiredness of someone
who rarely sleeps
Philosophical as a professor
with an audience
Talented with gifts given
freely with love
Caring as people should be
but often forget
Loving as we all want to be
and always are.........
Author notes
This is how I see myself....
Written September 29th, 2004
In a list
A contest entry
- :: Deep thoughts :: by Graveflower.
400 points, ended November 14, 2004, 41 entries
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Thank you Abdul
I am glad you enjoyed this poem, many thanks for your kind words 
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This poem is nice i am glad to see more of this oem u have in here so nice they way u write blend al the word u se inside tis place
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Thank you Purplerose, I have missed seeing you . I hope all is well with you? Many thanks for your kind words
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Thank you Zaffen, I hope you are not too unwell for too long as I would miss your comments
Many thanks for your kind words
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Thank you Teardrop I am glad you enjoyed it
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Thank you... yes it would be able to be read either way, but I am lucky, if I get down I can normally tell myself, enough is enough. I am glad you enjoyed this poem, many thanks for your kind words
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Aw... thank you so much I am so pleased that you enjoyed this, many thanks for your kind words
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Many thanks Timothy I am glad you enjoyed this piece, sometimes the mind works in mysterious ways
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Great
Fantastic piece, cutiepie! Spectacular, I'm sorry I haven't been getting to your pieces lately...I have been crazy! This was wonderful work, a perfect example of your brilliant mind! Great work I really enjoyed reading!
Purplerose
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Excellent
I was pleasently surprised as much as you AzureBlue with the difference of tone, in what was expected from the title, to what was actually written.
Very easy on the mind.
Even an old man like myself could understand it.
Sometimes we stand aside and see ourselves behaving in ways contrary to what we would wish.
Best to apologize quickly in such cases or your concience will have you for supper. LOL
If I'm not feeling well, I stay away from folks.
At least I don't offend anyone.
Some are even relieved.
Be well;
Zaffen -
This is a very deep yet, elegant write. Deep from the heart with a great insite of others. I love oyur format!
TD -
That was such a nice read and a nice surprise...(nice in a good way). I figured by the title that you would be all negative and lamenting your tortured poet's life but it really comes off quite pleasant and positive to me...Well done!
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This is a very good poem i really truly liked your stile, magnificent write i give you 420 stars, keep up the good work, and dont stop writing, you have talent and potential, amazing work.
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Excellent!
I loved the way you penned this one, the style, the flow, the you in this piece came pouring out...and I must say, you express yourself very well here on allpoetry! Thanks for being you, and sharing your fine poetry!
Much love my friend! 's
-Timothy The Poetic Weaver~
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Thank you I am glad you enjoyed this and yes it was aimed in my direction Your comments are appreciated, many thanks
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This is different! I do see this in alot of people as they tend to be! I think you are talking of yourself and what you consider your short falls? I could be wrong but I do pick at myself more then anyone else but give praise to others that may not be as good as myself! It is a fault I know! Great piece i enjoyed it !
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