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I say to myself i will never take any drugs

I SAY TO MYSELF I WILL NEVER TAKE ANY DRUGS
BUT THE MORE I THINK OF IT, I WONDER WHY?
WHY CANT I TAKE DRUGS, WHY CANT I GET HIGH?
WELL I KNOW THE ANSWER I DON'T WANT TO DIE.
BUT I KNOW MANY PEOPLE TAKE CRACK AND COKE
I KNOW ITS WRONG BUT I STILL THINK ITS OKAY
I DON'T KNOW WHY I JUST CANT SAY?

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Written September 29th, 2004

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  • QueenDeity
    October 31, 2004
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    Sounds like you're just really confused. I use to smoke pot and do other drugs but Now that I'm a mother now and married toa firefighter and dispatch worker I don't really do drugs anymore. lol. I'm glad I experimented though so I can know what each one does and how it affects you. I'd like to go into nursing and I think this would help...lol.

  • montez gold member
    October 10, 2004
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    I think it's banal


  • rufina caraid gold member
    October 8, 2004
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    Would you PLEASE remove this poem from this contest as the criteria has not been met. It's easily done by editing and changing it into a 'normal' poem. thank you

    Von


  • J Rhys Davies
    October 7, 2004
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    I don’t want to entirely sound like a broken record about the requirements of the contest, so I won’t. It’s good to see someone say they aren’t into drugs, but it’s a whole other story to actually live by it. I hope that is the case for you.

    ~ John


  • CookieZeal Greeters member
    October 7, 2004
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    Ditto. This would go well as a column theme. I take it you don't do the drugs, but wish you could?

    Try another! Welcome to the site.


  • Blushfulmoon silver member
    October 6, 2004
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    I think Von and Tina have expressed my sentiments exactly
    Ummmm this doesnt even fit the contest but glad you dont use drugs
    Hugs
    Susan~

  • JetBlackLullaby
    October 5, 2004
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    hope you don't do drugs.....didnt' seem to fit the contest


  • Ava Noire silver member
    October 2, 2004
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    Yes, Von is right, please remove this for the contest because you are not eligible to enter and this will not be considered for the prizes.


  • October 1, 2004
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    good

    it was good
    hope u dsont do drugs
    jonathan

  • pozo
    September 30, 2004
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    Yes, this isn't for us it's for the newbies
    I liked this poem although it didn't fit into any of the specifications and it was capitalised all the way through, it was still a great poem about a contemporary and contraversial issue
    Keep writing, you seem like a good old poet

  • rufina caraid gold member
    September 29, 2004
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    A big Oops! this contest is for new OCTOBER members to AP only. As you joined us in August could you please remove this from this contest - perhaps you may have posted it incorrectly.
    Thanks.
    Von

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