Look at them below
running around from place to place
so many things to be done
but they feel like they have to
little time
Sheltered in their little bubbles
unaware of the world that
surrounds their being
unable to see the true reflection
of humanity
They go ahead trying to deal
with their "oh so tragic problems"
while their world screams in agony
it screams for their help
but they cannot hear
why?
If only they would slow down
If only they would open their eyes
and free their minds
then maybe they will see the true
face of pain
the true face of hatred
the true face of the human race
and when they will see
only then will they be able to
change it
but until that day
they will carry on with their
busy lives
in there sheltered little
bubbles.
Author notes
Ok so on the plane... looking down at the tiny dots which were A) cars B ) people or C) houses and i this came out, eh whatever!
Written September 29th, 2004
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hey..great poem. It really put things into perspective.
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This is a great poem, and it conveys a strong message! I also like the concept of everyone being in their own bubbles, oblivious to the world outside of them, because that very much describes modern society. Nice job!
-DarkDestiny -
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Awesome write. keep it up man. i really like this. dont back down. keep up the good stuff. -
Thanks Matt!!
Coca-cola, wonderbra
-M
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wow, this is so awesome! this is my favorite of yours thus far, and i really like the statement you are making in this. maybe because i have the same views, but ya know. i love it, and keep penning on!
(bort, donkeypunch, coca-cola, wonderbra) hahaha!
much love,
-matt -
you just beat me at portraying this idea, i've tried it twice, but i sposed i was blinded by my anger at people living like that. good job.
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