My heart still beats
against my will;
beneath my breast
my heart beats still.
Still beats my heart,
despite defeat!
‘Though nothing’s left,
still my heart beats.
Beats my heart, still.
I want no part.
Oh, trait’rous thing!
Be still, my heart.
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I woke up with this phrase twisting around in my head (my heart still beats, my heart beats still, etc.) and couldn't make it stop. I gave in and played with it here. Maybe now I will get some peace! LOL
Written September 29th, 2004
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I liked that! It was very entertaining in a short sort of way.
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Cool write!! it was pure and simple and to the point
always
~Jenn~
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wow, thats really cool. i like it heaps.
love ya!
-leigh
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"Oh, trait’rous thing!/ Be still, my heart." I kind of like ordering the heart around. Sometimes you have to do that or it gets a little too rowdy. I like it.
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I liked this alot. It was short and simple and i liked how it had the same phrase in it all twisted.
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