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Captive

Teasing, testing waters
Captive by blue eyes
Enchant me why don’t ya?
Drawing lines, bending rules
Scratching at the surface
Haven’t I been here before?
Temptation is a deadly foe
Trust is a delicate issue
Why haven’t I walked away?
Bitter memories, blissful thoughts
Regretting things I have yet to do
How do you chain me?


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I have no idea, just random thoughts as I was trying to sleep. I don't even thing it makes for a good piece at all but I didn't want to lose them... Maybe it can be worked into something better??
Written September 28th, 2004

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