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Kerry or Bush ~PART 1~

Second day of November
Where will Americans be
Good and bad to remember
In the land of the Free

A man's smile upturned
While Reading to a young school
Manny lessons children learned
Sometimes learning is our only tool

He was told of the devastation
In front of children so young
To cameras he turned to our nation
That a thousand bees had stung

He's protected each and every one
He claims theres still need for the war
Iraquis leader goes down like the sun
Suicide Bombings continue to kill more

Streets and buildings,abandoned and bloody
Still Temples and towns filled with horrid cries
Ragdoll toys and lost family,while dirt and tears,turn muddy
A man whos like his fesces(poop),left behind his many flies

Author notes

This will be a series of poems I write..I am NOT BUSH Bashing..nor am I to criticize Kerry..I just plan on voting this year and Im a tad confused
Written September 28th, 2004

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  • Purplerose
    December 23, 2004
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    This is a really interesting perspective/question on what has happened, or did happen I should say. A very hard topic, that me, a 12 year old, could never farsee or imagine, wonderful work though! I was favored to the Kerry side, and sadly it didn't work! Great job with this one, nice work! Happy holidays!
    Purplerose


  • Deviantpoetess
    December 12, 2004
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    perfect Comment

    YOU GO GIRL...OHHHHMYYY I send you an applause for this comment..well written indeed..LOL


  • cosmicrose
    December 11, 2004
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    Two heads on the same hydra anyhow. The only Bush I'm fond of is my own... lol

  • NeferMaatNetjer silver member
    October 1, 2004
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    I can tell you I'm not voting to re-elect the Emperor