My love is like the love of old,
The love of treasures that's untold,
You're my silver, you're my gold,
You're all the treasures that I know.
You're my emeralds, you're my pearls,
You're my sweet young lovely girl.
You're my diamond, you're my gem,
With you my light will never dim.
You're my ruby, you're my sapphire,
You're my only true desire.
You're my joy, you're my peace,
With you all my troubles cease.
You're my beginning, you're my end,
Only you I will defend.
You're my joy, you're my sorrow,
You're my dreams of tomorrow.
You're the girl that keeps me warm
And keeps me far away from harm.
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Written October 1st, 1998
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i love this one too hun..you're good
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I loved this poem too
I do enjoy reading romantic writes and this one is so full of love and devotion that the lines seems to be smiling to us.
How wonderful it is to be in love, and to walk on the clouds everytime you think on te one who is in your heart.
Very warm and beautiful poem, thanks for the pleasant read!
Kisses and love,
Mari
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You must love this person very much if you fell this way about them. i love it when men show emotion like that. i really liked the ending:
"You're the girl that keeps me warm
And keeps me far away from harm"
This shows that she holds a special meaning in your life, that you you need her to simply live.
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I hope you see mine soon, i want to see more of yours soon..
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I like your poem, it's very lovey dovy thing i guess. I like how you really wrote, it do you write lyrics?
I say you would be good at that don't you think?
I mean it would be really good for you.
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lovey dovey. But it's a great poem, great imagery.
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wow, great write here dude, this is awesome... if you show it to that special someone I bet she would like it... awesome job. That's a good idea ( the line You're my silver, you're my gold, You're all the treasures that I know.) great line, and then hoq you used it over was great.
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You are the other half of me
You are my now and my eternity
This was such a soft and loving write of love , really baring all feelings , and I hope that if this is for someone special , she will get to read it and treasure it as one would a rare gem
Reenie
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Good rhymes on this one. I didn't follow exactly the rhyme scheme or if there was one exactly, which there doesn't need to be for good rhymes schemes.
I'm not to into the whole love poems either but occasionally I like to read them, they make me feel kind of warm and hopeful which is a nice sensation. You have done so...good job -
Awwwwwwww
i think its gorgeous the way that you related her to all of the gems 
its so cool!!! This was a pretty write
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