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TEETH RATTLING GROWLS
ON VIOLENT METAL RIFFS
HEADBANGER'S ANTHEM!!!
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I'VE STARTED A HEADBANGERS GROUP CALLED ALL METAL!!!!!
allpoetry.com/Application/828811
GO TO THIS LINK TO APPLY TO THE GROUP, ALL METAL
MEET YOU IN THE MOSH PIT! METAL RUUUULES!!! \m/
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Written September 27th, 2004
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Sweet. Metal! Gotta love it. >.<
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Wow
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SWEET! I like the sound of that!
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Why, thank you...thank you very much! LOL!
I'm glad you liked it!
You have exquisite taste in music, my dear....
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moshpit!
awesome haiku for metalheads, loved it my friend was aweosme hehe RAWWWW!!! good stuff mate
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Lol. What a beautiful haiku.
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Kool, But don't like metal
I agree with WolfMage -
woah?! a metal group? MetallicA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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BECAUSE METALLICA KICKS ASS!
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yeah, i really wanna join. Why, you ask? Well because Metal Kicks ALL ASS! I mean c'mon its freakin metal you cant beat it... or its listeners b/c we're gonna have a freakin revelution and march around beating the crap out of everyone who stands in our way! Mwuhahaha! BANG YOUR HEAD, BANG YOUR HEAD!
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Hey i remember putting a comment on here...i was all like woo metal! BANG YOUR HEAD BANG YOUR HEAD!!!.... (shivers) now where are my cds... hehehe peace
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To join the group go to this link....this is the application
page. Just type something in the box and send it so I can add you to the group...
Let me know if you have any trouble with it!
Lorena -
I'd love to join Metal kick ass w/out metal theres no reason for music
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Cool cool. Very original. I'm joining.
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how do we join?
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LMAO!!!
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woo!!
Woo!! ahh look its kelso...oh my bad but still woo go freakin metal...ya gotta love it... BANG YOU HEAD BANG YOUR HEAD!! peace .
_Jes_ -
sweetness i love it all its so awsome!!!
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Nice, but not for me.
I'm not a fan of metal, sorry. -
misted fog now rolls
low moans of gutair riffs begin
excitment fill air
great hiaku. I am sure ninja monkey was honored you asked him to become apart of the group. May metal live on forever -
Sounds kool, I live for the pit.
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OH yes.. METAL IS THE BEST! ^.^ \m/ I'm joining. Sorry.. haven't been on AP for a while. Heh.. VIVA LA MUSIC! \m/
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im not a headbanger so i wont join..hehe thats lucky for you tho cuz id be like the one guy who just tags along trying to fit in haha..but yea i feel the essence of the headbanger was captured and encapsulated into these 3 little lines, well done -
kool haiku, i felt the vocab could have used a bit more to make it more graphic, seeing as how it is a poem about metal, the most graphic music style next to phycadelic rock
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This kindof lost me. Its not really something I would write about. It doesnt make a lot of sence to me. But i thought i would comment. Maybe you oculd clue me in on what this is about ????
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hehe that was really cool! good haiku!
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Those three lines were fantastic! I'm not a fan of metal, however, so I'll refrain from joining... both for your sake and for mine. lol. The haiku was incredibly expressive. It definitely and accurately described a very particular feeling... in this case, associated with music or admiration for something. Well done, indeed.
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excellent to the power of 2
Wonderful! Made my teeth ache slightly as I read it! Amazing power for a haiku. Excellent! -
AWESOME!!! haha. damn now i wanna go to OZZFEST....which i can't...grr...oh well. awesome write!
-Sublunary <\3 -
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Iam sorry but this out of my realm and I cannot honestly say I understand or even agree ??????????? KeeperOfTheCats -
Great write!!! Very up beat
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Awesome! I love the topic and the form - a unique blend - well written - great job!
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Yer!!
Yer this group looks good i love heavy metal death metal type stuff can i join> Nevergiveup u have a good taste in music. Loli try to lisen to my music before im told of for making a noise and told to put my sisters busted on "cringe
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Nice haiku AzureBlue!
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LOL. A haiku on headbanging. Just when I thought I'd read about everything... well, I was wrong. This was midly amusing. Love the use of all capital letters to convey the energy behind the music. I've got to ask- what music and bands qualify as headbanger material? I like stuff like Mudvayne and Disturbed and Clutch and Anal Cunt and Tool. I used to listen to Pantera and White Zombie when I was in high school And I used to watch Headbanger's Ball on MTV (without my mother's knowledge! LOL)
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Interesting. Being a metalhead myself, this seems pretty damn welcoming. I commend you fully, we must extend the metal empire.
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\m/ rock on with the metal
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Whoo! Headbanger's rock on bizatch. \m/ Lol. Very nice one Azure.
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