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A Fairy of Nature

She dances down underneath a flower
Wind swaying as raidrops fall
Arms folded at rest
Heeding mother natures call

Gusts plays music with her gossamer wings
Pointed ears that knows no chill
Green complexion turns to a slight blush
She's contented still

The columbines sways in a rhyme dance
She lightly hums a tune
To her the dripping raindops
Are a warm summer afternoon

She can only see the beauty
That Mother Nature shows
Considers her life in harmony
As only a fairy would know

The columbine sways in a rhyme dance
She lightly hums a tune
To her the dripping raindrops
Are a warm summer afternoon

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Written July 10th, 2002

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  • myrataal silver member
    July 12, 2002
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    excellent

    Oh you are a Fairy, too, dearest Susan! This is just sooooo beautiful! Lovit, lovit, lovit! Who did the picture?

  • Just4u
    July 11, 2002
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    excellent

    Got to love the fairies...this type at least...hehe
    Hugs...Eddy


  • soulwarrior silver member
    July 11, 2002
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    don't touch it!

    Such awesome beauty in this piece or write, Question though did
    picture inspire poem, or poem first, picture found to match, they fit so well together. God bless you dear.:)


  • AndrewHide silver member
    July 10, 2002
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    don't touch it!

    Beautifully done Susan,
    a truely wonderful piece.

    Andrew


  • Barb Davidson silver member
    July 10, 2002
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    excellent

    Lovely poem Susan..oh to be a fairie....
    Barbsx

  • wiccatarot
    July 10, 2002
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    neutral

    brought a smile to my lips.........and opened the door to a place of fantasy.......that we often lose as adults........truly beautiful :)


  • Monkei
    July 10, 2002
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    don't touch it!

    It does seem to have song like... I would almost say mystical quality to it. Such a beautiful poem.


  • kvwriter silver member
    July 10, 2002
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    don't touch it!

    Susan, this is a beaut! Don't we all sometimes wish we could be those little fairies, or at least spend a day or so with them--we would learn that when the rain falls in life; everything's all right. Love this!;)Kelly


  • July 10, 2002
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    don't touch it!

    This is a beautiful write! ~Gayla~


  • NurseChilly gold member
    July 10, 2002
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    don't touch it!

    I believe in fairies..very nice write..has a song like quality to it..~GILL~


  • Dreamweaver silver member
    July 10, 2002
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    don't touch it!

    *Smiling ... Beauty all around with this one Susan ...
    Well done!

    Sammy

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