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Today

I don't know what to write,
but I am so full of emotion.
I may as well try to let it all go,
even though it won't do any good.

I feel very tired.
I've worked all day, it's only 8 pm.
But I feel like I've run a marathon,
even though the night is still young.

I feel very destructive.
I want to drive into a tree,
just to face whatever consequences.
Let fate take it's course.

I feel very irritated.
The things people say, the way they act.
Just seem to get under my skin.
Whether they mean to or not.

I feel very lonely.
My life is slowly passing by,
and there's no one to share it with.
I'm tired of being alone.

I'm sick of feeling the same every day.
I need to find a way to change.
I'm just waiting for my moment.
I'm just waiting for a difference.

Author notes

Umm, yeah. It says it all, pretty much.
Written September 27th, 2004

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  • Readerrach
    October 9, 2004
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    nicely done

    exactly, i can totally relate


  • CoyoteLyle
    October 5, 2004
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    Thanks again


  • silver bugs
    October 4, 2004
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    Beautiful

    (If I commented on one poem I might as well comment on some more )
    This is a great way of showing your feelings....Great job on the poem. I hope things get better soon, I'm sure you'll find that special someone Great poem!! Thanks for sharing...
    ~Lana

  • CoyoteLyle
    September 29, 2004
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    Yeah. I hear ya. I know it'll all get better eventually. And I know we'll all find someone eventually. Eventually everything happens I hate being all pissed off like that. That's why I usually try to hide it as best I can. Which probably isn't good. But it's for everone else's benefit more than mine...

    Yeah, I'm definately taking advantage of the site. Whether or not it's helping is debatable.

  • Loveable Cherub
    September 28, 2004
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    I have felt like this so many times before. And I know how much it sucks. Sometimes I am so tired that I just lay in my bed, but my thoughts won't let me sleep. Or sometimes I want to throw anything in my hands at the wall; or rip anything in my hands to shreds. Oh, and I hate people, I am sure you've read my poem about how I hate people. And I know what you are saying when you are lonely. But it will get better, you will find someone to be with, and they will be your perfect match. And you will be happy, and she will be happy.

    I'm sorry you feel like this. But I do hope that writing poetry has become some sort of release for you. You sure have taken advantage of this site!!
    ^loves^ k


  • September 28, 2004
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    awww. poor klye. you're caught in a glass case of emotion.

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