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I don't know myself anymore
It's like I replaced myself
with someone less confident
and ashamed of himself
So brash. So bold,
Is what I used to be.
Ducking and dodging relationships.
I just want to be free.
But then comes a time in every man life
Where he wants to settle down,
get him a wife
Then after you get that
You still haven't filled your void
Or maybe I'm just talking
And making some noise
But now I just feel like hanging
out with my boys
contemplating my life and all of its joys

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This is how I feel...............
Written September 27th, 2004

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  • MacabreCadavre
    October 12, 2004
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    these kind of feelings are always changing... it kind of sucks, but its life. haha... i dunno. change is good for you, whether you lke it or not, i suppose.


  • Dutch Doll
    October 3, 2004
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    Well, I am glad the end ended with you just chillin with the guys, because if you said you were going to go slit your writs it woulda killed the write , like most end up doing, so thanks! Great write Love that you can write out your feelings like this.