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the day i get revenge

the wheels on the bus go round and round  and the door opens to sweet revenge i cant believe i am getting on the bus i hate it with a passion it is so stupid.my revenge will come on my next poem.-----shaniqwa,and shanana

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it mean alot to me
Written September 27th, 2004

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  • nobodys-girl
    September 27, 2004
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    ok you guys have really lost it o mean it doesnt really make sense but any way giid job i guess i will see the both of you tomorrow.