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sick

im sick
sick of girls wearing extremly revealing & disgusting clothing
sick of the popular kids thinking they reign superior over everyone else
sick of people being put down because of their size or shape
im sick of people beheading others in Iraq
sick of people thinking their smarter than others and bragging about it
sick of people wondering if they're worthy of living on this earth
and most of all, im sick of how rude people have become.

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is it good? nothing 2 harsh,please
Written September 27th, 2004

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  • nobodys-girl
    September 27, 2004
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    hey good job i really like it thanks for entering my contest