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Take My Heart and Soul..

Yes this is love when we feel

the same more then deep in soul and body

then love blazze in eyes

burining sensation of desire

Whispering some sweet words in my ear

affable messages float in my consciousness

Echoes in my soul, murmurs in my heart

effection penetrates sweet poison in my veins

Poison which hone my senses

A storm of love emerges in my soul

Destroying every remnant of discontent

giving me vitality

Getting deeper and deeper

I comes forward for..

Knowing that you are there

With glow in my eyes, thriving lips

I muster my courage..

And whisper your name..

Feel you near my soul..

Call you with all my heart..

Your Knight take your hand...

with it I give my heart and soul..

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Written September 27th, 2004

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  • Unspoken Thoughts
    October 21, 2005
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    I think this is beautiful. love is great.there is no other feeling this great in the world then to be in love. i think that you wrote something very great. hold on to it,never let it go. Keep writing more poems...ok? oh and thanks for the comment


  • November 9, 2004
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    Very beautiful and sweet

    - Sock


  • ariazephyrzoe gold member
    October 30, 2004
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    Knight...this is beautiful...i am totally blown away
    you have such a genuine emotion of devotion to someone sincerely depicted in this one...i love this

    with opens arms!!!
    that's true love
    so unselfish
    with all your heart and soul...


  • bulletimperio
    October 22, 2004
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    Knight, this is an explicit love, and a wonderful thoughts in words so vivid. How could I ever take my Knight's heart and soul???hahaha! Oh yes, I have my own knight in my works, got a lot for him yet I'm not sure where he is, lol! I loved your piece, this is definitely beautiful!


  • Meridian
    September 28, 2004
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    Touching

    Hello my Knight As you know I've been busy of late and haven't been online much, but I will get around to posting new stuff soon I hope. I'm having a bit of a financial crisis oa the moment Anyway this is stunning and is clearly written from the heart. It is a very deep and beautiful response that coveys so much feeling and warmth.

    ~Samantha


  • Anais Elaine
    September 27, 2004
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    Beautiful, simply Beautiful

    Oh Knight, this is so beautiful, so romantic, so filled with love, The lady who inspired this poem is someone who is very lucky.
    I loved everything about this piece
    Take care because I care
    Elaine

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