Sadness, tinged with an apology;
To be accepted with hope for
forgiveness;
Unthinkingly provoked, disappointment;
Dismay, at offending a
friend.......
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I am sorry.......
Written September 26th, 2004
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Aw, its short yet so descripting and just bluntly tells you what is wrong. Its sad to lose trust or hurt a friend. This is very touching and I found this well written and expressed. Great Job in writing this... Have a Happy Thanksgiving!
---Sara
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Thank you Rebeka... I took a lot of time with this poem ( even though it looks short) because I had offended someone I never meant to offend. Many thanks for your kind words
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oh i know this sadness iin knowing how much a beloved person has been hurt or let down due to my thoughtless actions..this short verse whispers to the wind and to me the emotion of regret and remorse...very beautiful, both poem and graphic.
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Lol well yesthey would be out of luck here, st Pat mad off with all of ours
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Ms Cutie, Just to make you ‘jealous’ - we have a family of Kookaburra's come to our back door each afternoon for nibbles - they are beautiful birds (rather fearsome hunters though - they wouldn't like Ireland they can catch snakes).
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Aw you found me out.... Couldnt find the bird I was looking for so this was the next best thing
He is rather cute dont you think? Come to think of it, I dont really like beer and a sheila is not my cup of tea , so I have to hold my hands up and say I hope the person this was intended for realises how amny hours & waded through goole thinggy to find this bird, ( that looks to me like a fat woodpecker 
Many thanks for your kind words, they are appreciated
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I certainly hope so and thank you
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Ms Cutiepie, very nicely penned - I don't believe you have done anything requiring a need to apologise. - Besides that is a Kookaburra in the image. - This would imply the only thing you could have done to upset someone is to drink all the beer and/or look, long at someones shella and neither act sounds like you to me. – lovely poem – thank you
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Awwww cutiepie... I hope this helped put your relationship with the person this was intended for on the road to renewed friendship. What a beautiful way to have apologized. Great job!
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Beautiful shot. The bird is as sweet and delicate as the apology. I hope it is accepted, or has been already. "I'm sorry" are two of the most beautiful words in the world. (After "I love you" and "stay".)
Very nice. Thanks.
Mark
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Aww, I hope they forgive you! I think it's a great way to apologize, this way. Very moving words you used here.
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Awe what a heartfelt apology I don't know who this is to but I certainly hope they accept it. Very sweet and very special little write here Lynne.
~Lyrical
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What a way to forgive! I hope this person surely forgives you. By this poem you sound very sweet! This was fantastic! Beautiful write, I loved the line:
"Sadness, tinged with an apology"
Once again, excellent write!
~Kayla
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