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Stalker

An innocent crush
A lonely guy
Who will followyou forever
He watches you at night
He follows you in the dark
He is obsessed with your prescence
Your a picture in his mind
That will never be erased
And will follow him to his grave
No one can stop him
Not even a cop or paper
He wants you alone
So his fanatisies can come true
And he will be with you
He doesn't care about the consequences
As long as the craving is met
He wants you forever
He is your stalker.

Author notes

This was written out of sheer bordem in 8th grade
Written September 26th, 2004

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  • Tumbleweed
    April 18, 2005
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    This is really creepy I've been stalked before, so I know how scary it is. I like the part "noone can stop him", it's so true. It's hard to stop a stalker until it's already too late. Great write.


  • DeathsAcre
    October 18, 2004
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    Thank you.


  • ruminations
    September 26, 2004
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    Awesome

    awesome...i love it...i want a guy like that...strange i know...but oh well..

    really great write..
    I loved it..
    Well worded and good..
    Keep it up..


  • poetriae furor
    September 26, 2004
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    Creepy! You're going to make me paranoid