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The Lonely Woman

She watches you from across the way
She knows who you are
And where you belong
Your hopes dreams and fears
Are tatooed in her mind
And she knows exactly what
Goes on in your life
She never comes out of her house
And watching you from afar
She wonders when the day will come
When she can meet her prey
For she is the ghost of the lonely woman
Seeking for revenge
On that one person
Who showed her
Her fears
You look just like the person
The one that took her life
And she is the person
You ran over inspite
If you hadn't dranken that night
She would be alive
It is all your fault
Why she had to die that night
She will watch you forever
Until she gets revenge
When on that sweet day
You too will be put in your grave.

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Written September 26th, 2004

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  • DeathsAcre
    October 18, 2004
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    Thanx.


  • poetriae furor
    September 26, 2004
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    good... freaky... but good


  • September 26, 2004
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    i really enjoyed this. i like how she knows you. everything about you she knows but you don't know her. it's like you're on her mind, no matter what for, you're on her mind. maybe that's what people want...someone to think about you...