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Better

I wish things could be better
I wish I could go on
But the knife is looking at me
With open arms
It makes me feel better
When I cut and bleed
Because can't you see
I am an obsessive cutter
If I cut things get better
And if I don't thigns get worse
So let me think whiche one is better
I choose the knife over pain
It will make me better
And maybe if I cut to deep
Things will be better forever
I'll push away my thoughts
And grab the beautiful knife
And cut myself to bleed a river
For soon things will be better forever.

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Written September 26th, 2004

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  • shouri13
    January 22, 2005
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    this poem is really good i like the part that says " cut myself to bleed a river for soon things will be better forever"
    shouri13
    Edited on Jan 22, 6:33 p.m. because ''.