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The Rose

THE ROSE

The beauty of the fragrant rose,
is captured in the morning sun.
Awakening your sight and smell,
another summer sunrise has begun.

It's beauty stands for devotion,
roses speak to the one you love.
The softness of the rose petals,
created by God in Heaven above.

He surrounded the rose's beauty,
to touch the thorns, causes pain.
To ensure it's lasting loveliness,
it is nourished with April rain. 

Roses always bring a sense of joy,
to an unhappy moment in ones life.
It puts a feeling in your heart,
lessening life's sadness and strife.

Inhale the fragrance of it's beauty,
cast your eyes upon all the splendor.
The rose has a subtle tranquility,
beauty emitting nature's wonder.




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Written September 26th, 2004

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  • Linny9
    March 1, 2008
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    The background and poem are beautiful.

  • cindy4
    February 15, 2008

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    This rose background goes well with this poem. Great write. Good rhyming and good flow. Beautiful imagery.


  • Chrissy03
    September 22, 2007

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    Very beautiful background of a roses. The poem is a beautiful written. Great write. Beautiful imagery and the poem is good rhymed.


  • sue2
    August 1, 2007
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    A beautiful background and a beautiful poem. The roses are so beautiful!


  • Katyv
    July 26, 2007
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    Such a beautiful poem. I love roses!


  • jennylynn
    July 15, 2007
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    Very beautiful poem! Roses are so beautiful.


  • holly9
    July 11, 2007
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    Beautiful!

    I love roses!


  • Candy6
    May 24, 2007
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    very beautiful poem


  • Sandygram silver member
    September 27, 2004
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    Thank you Elaine, you always say such nice things. Hope all is going well with you. Talk to you later. Thanks so much for the comment. Take care, Sandy


  • Anais Elaine
    September 27, 2004
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    Oh Sandy this is beautiful, The rose is my fav flower, and holds such beauty.
    Very well written as always.
    Take care because I care
    Elaine

  • Sandygram silver member
    September 27, 2004
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    Thanks Melanie, for your lovely comment. Always appreciated. Take care. Sandy


  • Sandygram silver member
    September 27, 2004
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    Thanks for the lovely comment Laura. As always, I appreciate you nice comments. Keep smilin today. Take care, Sandy


  • luckynsincere
    September 26, 2004
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    This was beautiful Sandy....It was lovely and delightfully refreshing....
    Hugs, Melanie

  • lgodina
    September 26, 2004
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    yay very good write, I loved it, IT WAS SO SMOOTH TO READ. GOD BLESS YOU MY FRIEND AND TAKE CARE LAURA


  • Sandygram silver member
    September 26, 2004
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    Thank you so much for the lovely comment Tamara. I always enjoy reading your comments. Take care, Sandy


  • Ladybug
    September 26, 2004
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    the rose is truly one of kind flower that has a great metaphor meaning in life and love for all
    A beautiful tribute to a great symbol we use for special times in our life
    very nice Tamara


  • Sandygram silver member
    September 26, 2004
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    Thanks pozo, I love your work too. I always enjoy hearing from you and appreciate your nice comments take care, Sandy

  • pozo
    September 26, 2004
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    A beautiful poem about a beautiful flower, I loved the rhyme in this A wonderful write, so excellently written- thanks for commenting on my poem, I love your work

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