want to speak
~~but can't~~
You understand
understand
~~don't you~~
Over flowing
spilling
~~intense~~
Fire burning
embers red
~~no control~~
Want to speak
want to speak
~~but can't~~
~
Sybil ~
Want to speak
want to speak
~~but can't~~
You understand
understand
~~don't you~~
Over flowing
spilling
~~intense~~
Fire burning
embers red
~~no control~~
Want to speak
want to speak
~~but can't~~
~ Sybil ~
want to speak
~~but can't~~
You understand
understand
~~don't you~~
Over flowing
spilling
~~intense~~
Fire burning
embers red
~~no control~~
Want to speak
want to speak
~~but can't~~
~
Sybil ~Author notes
Written September 26th, 2004
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amazing like always
I love your poems like this...they are sort and to the point...
Want to speak
want to speak
~~but can't~~
You understand
understand
~~don't you~~
I can sooooo relate to this...i hate my fam never has time for me and when i talk they don't here me...
And i love all the pics on your poems...they r so cool Merry Christmas by the way -
If I don't mind??? I am very honoured. Thank you very much.
Hugs and bites, Lay Raven -
this is really good u r very talented. i've been reading your stuff and u r awesome!!!! im adding u to my favorites(if you dont mind)
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love the pic
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Wow, this was very good. I love that its dark and it flows very well. Good job. I love the picture it adds to the darkness of the poem and they go hand in hand together. Keep up the good work!
Always and Forever,
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this is a great piece...
i really liked it and its intensity....
the rhythm throughout goes with the almost breathless desire to speak.....
amazing......
*shadow
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I've had moments like this, OMG does that mean I'm, oh well. Nice short to the point poem, interesting picture with it. Helps to get your message across. Puts the reader into the area your directing your words.
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great
Very good poem very dark intense like the picture as well keep up the good work -
this is a great job! i liked it a lot well done...very darkish kind of and very full of meaning! well done and keep it up i liked it a lot
later days
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i enjoyed this though i can't pin down exactly why. could be because it fits my own mood right now.
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this is a very emmotional peace and it says alot and you can tell byt the way you wrote it love this write
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Aaaaaaaaaaaw Damn...I was not the first to comment...
kicks the page floor
Pouts....
DAMN!! -
I am the first to comment...sticks tongue out...
Muwaaaaahahahahaha
Now this is a product of Sybil........
steps back
further back
holy water in hand.....starts squirting it from the bottle....
runs like hell back to her page
...shouting...Great piece though.......
and much love~Desire
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good
words are emotions, as i always say. i can feel something's boiling in u, and u long to let the hot vapor out... dont u? keep writing dude...
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