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All Poetry In Me

*ilovepoetry* and sitting here *DreamnMyLifeAwy*.
I’m the *In-depthCreator* in a “DistantWorld* everyday.
I hold the genius to combine the power of *LoVe-N-HaTe*.
I switch the definitions and give them the same *fate*.

*ILoveMusic* and the *False-Hopes* that it brings.
I love the *illusions* that make you dance and sing.
I control the *melody* that makes you move your feet.
I compose the rhythm that makes *Yourheartbeat*.

*I* *love * words, all words, *JustWords* by themself.
I’m a *FreeThinker*. I need to be *leftalone* to think by myself.
*I-OU-Nothing*, but yet I share a piece of my brain,
To taste my *Frozen Fears* and drink my *CherryRain*.

Author notes

there is a space between the *love and (*) because putting them together creates ...  which isn't a bad thing, but might interrupt the flow.
Written September 25th, 2004

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  • PrincessOfFire
    September 26, 2004
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    Nicely done. Good luck in the contest. God bless you Rose


  • candy177
    September 26, 2004
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    Yes, this is very impressive! I was intrigued to take a peek because my man's got you on his favorites list! (Icemancm ) You did an excellent job with this, the whole thing flows very well and the names just fit perfectly! Good luck!

  • Addressee Unknown
    September 26, 2004
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    ooooo I like this one. Very impressive not only how you managed to use AP names BUT to make it rhyme without sounding cheesy.

    Good luck in the contest!