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Nowhere Heaven




You think it will never be
It never will
It Is

NowHere
The Great Perfection


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Written September 25th, 2004

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  • JoyBeingNow
    September 28, 2004
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    Thank you, MargaretG and haikumonk


  • haikumonk gold member
    September 26, 2004
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    Interesting and excellent write. You've produced and shared a Zen moment combined with rich resonance. Nice work.............

    Don


  • MargaretG
    September 26, 2004
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    Well done

    Sweet, short, simple, true.
    To quote myself, "my God is omnipresent, and heaven's where he stays."
    Very nicely written.


  • Maatkara gold member
    September 26, 2004
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    And some Zen 'masters' are "nothing special".

    ~ G

  • JoyBeingNow
    September 26, 2004
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    Thank you.
    It's so deceptively simple, isn't it? "Nothing special," said the Zen master..
    Well, you know - what's words got to do with it?
    Edited on Sep 28, 7:43 because ''.


  • Maatkara gold member
    September 25, 2004
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    Excellent depiction of The Paradigm.

    ~ G


  • Sharon Corr gold member
    September 25, 2004
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    Divine Stunning Beautifully Penned
    I love how you entwine the words NowHere
    Showing us it is in the moment of being
    You're a divine teacher for all of us
    This is an exquisite example of where less is more.

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