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Longing

Longing for your glance.
Your smile.
 Your blushing face.
Longing for your eyes.
Your voice.
 Your laugh.
Longing for your touch.
Your hand in mine.
 Your kiss.

Longing for you...
Longing for us...

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Just something short.
Written September 24th, 2004

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  • CoyoteLyle
    October 24, 2004
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    Hehe. Good I love making people smile.

  • Readerrach
    October 24, 2004
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    oh so beautiful:)

    This is a really sweet poem...I just discovered it you make me smile, you know that? hehe!!

  • Gogetalife
    October 17, 2004
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    sooo sweet..


  • CoyoteLyle
    September 29, 2004
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    I really have no idea. I guess my brain just works in mysterious ways. I've not neither of those two, but somehow this came out of my head. I dunno... I guess you'd have to ask my brain what it's deal is. It just sort of came to mind, for some reason. Maybe I like to think romantical things. Heheh

  • Loveable Cherub
    September 28, 2004
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    Ok, so like, I can't write this nice poemy stuff that's all sweet if I don't have someone, or at least someone in mind. So what's goin' on in the world of Lyle?

  • Melissa Gayle gold member
    September 25, 2004
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    It is written from the heart.

    Beautiful.


  • September 25, 2004
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    aw, it's nice. a good, sweet thing to write after the last one.

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