Nobodysees?
Please know
that somebody sees!
At one time you felt
like a person that nobodysees
but now you have emerged
with the only key:
you must see yourself!
From depressed to blessed
all because you figured it out:
enough of the angst
there is family amongst
the shadows
to love and adore
all you needed to do
was open the door
to those that loved you:
Theres LdyBrknWing
a perfect mom
DyingRose
so strong and calm
Tina, your beloved adoptee
beautifully inspired by her poetry
Jcketch82, your neighbor you can count on
this wonderful family all makes you strong.
Nobodysees is somebody everybody sees
so clearly in your poetry
a loving, talented creative soul
so to all readers!
you'll love her poetry
it's worth the stroll.
Author notes
Okay guys I was under extreme pressure after racking my brain to come up with all sorts of facts.(see contest fro details). So enjoy the poem, but don't be critical! lol
Written September 24th, 2004
In a list
A contest entry
- AP Two Hour Treasure Hunt!! by nobodysees.
500 points, ended September 24, 2004, 5 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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Excellent
This was beautiful.
Hopefully it had the desired effect.
It should have.
I loved the way it flowed from on name and atribute to another without breaking stride.
Well done.
Be well;
Zaffen -
You sure can slam!
I liked this too, very good for such a short time and something uplifting for the person to read.
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And boy can you slam...
~Bezoar -
Bezoar, the two hours were spent racking my brain for the 18 questions laid out to us! lol. I had to get this poem done lickity split slam style!
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Not bad at all. Congrats on the silver... You're on a roll girl. Keep it up. I love to read your works and watch you grow. (and you did this in under two hours? amazing!)
~Bezoar -
This is a nice poem about different people. I have no idea about the contest, and I don't know most of the people either, but this is good. Good luck in the contest!
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