My thoughts ramble towards a completion;
An essay, of words with no sense or rhyme;
Just an ability to congregate, somewhere
below the outer- reaches waiting for some semblance
of organisation, into this disheveled mess
I call a brain.
Natural flow is beyond the horizon floating
just out of grasp; Stuttering and starting
as a dis-jointed puppet, going in opposite directions,
tugging reason with metaphors and punctuation;
wonderment, as to why I torture this keyboard
with ill spent grammar, and overwork the spelling apparatus
within this machine;
Cussedness, drives me on to
a penultimate sentence, perceived in it's
peripheral deliberations; Do I knowingly
subject myself to this state of affairs
willingly?
Yes, she groans today and for ever more.........
Author notes
Abstract is a flow of nothingness, producing pleasentries...
Written September 24th, 2004
In a list
A contest entry
- Abstract Poetry by Purplerose.
300 points, ended September 27, 2004, 4 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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i really liked this!! thanks for applauding mine!!
i woul ddefinately applaud this, but i dont have any more left 
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Glad you liked it Zaffen, pretty much explains the real me
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I loved the "Tumble dried effect " yes we can make up our own words, if we didnt, who would Many thanks for your kind words
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The spelling of Organisation / organization is optional in my dictionary, but thank you for pointing it out, it is appreciated
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Thank you for you comments, they are always appreciated
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Excellent
Oh, hon. This was good. I enjoyed every silly sylable and each sublime reach.
Twisting in the wind, inside your mind, Dirvish dance of clamoring ryhme.
Woohoo!!
Can you tell I liked it?
LOL
Be well;
Zaffen -
while this is an abstract poem, it holds such um...non abstractedness (as poets we can make up words right?) the theme is coherent, even if the language is not. it takes the picture and tumble dries it until they are one.
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organisation should be spelled organization i believe. I am often tortured by my repetitive thought processes in my head and sometimes the mundane bleak nothingness but i usually squeeze out something, or try. This is lovely. Take care.
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The plight of every writer, it seems.
To think, to deliberate, to reach for the flow that comes and goes at its own want.
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Thank you yes it rather flew off at a tangent Glad you enjoyed it
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Wow, I haven't been on AP much lately, but wow.... that was amazing (not that I'm really suprised, coming from you.) Anyways, I did enjoy it. . . it fits the topic pretty well. That was rather abstract. I enjoyed it, thank you very much for writing it.
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Many thanks for your kind words, they are appreciated
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Ah...true art is what is perceived in the eyes of the beholder...Abstract art is always interesting in the aspect that it can bring to mind so many different things in different minds...You have written a true piece of art here...Great job!
Victoria Lin -
Thank you Karen, yes a disheveled mess, fits very well
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Very nice. The way you've arranged the words here is reminiscent of a "disheveled mess" and fits the poem very well. Keep up the good work!
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Thank you Kate, yes there is so much depth in abstract, you only have to see the art, the beauty lying in one's own perception. We see what we want to see be it in words or paint. Many thanks for your kind words
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An excellent piece, I really don't know what to say, perhaps due it being abstract. Nothingness attains so much depth, if you really think about it. Thanks for the share and good luck in the contest.
Take care, Kate
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I am pleased that you could make some sense of my ramblings and if you could'nt then that ok too Many thanks for calling bye it is appreciated
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Great!
Hmmm. nothingness, I'm feeling like that alot these days, I must be abstact myself, lol..
Seriously, I loved it, but I do all the pieces your sweet heart pens!
-Timothy The Poetic Weaver~
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