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Just a Thought

Come to me, my sweet
Come to me and feel the love I have for you
For the first time
Know now there is nothing
To hinder us,
Nothing to stop our love
And then, the fun will begin

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not really a poem, it was a journal entry
Written July 7th, 2002

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  • Missing-Sarah
    August 17, 2003
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    aww very nice!
    super cute!
    bravo!
    -Sarah


  • finding myself 84
    January 12, 2003
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    don't touch it!

    great write. *sonya*

  • atia
    December 19, 2002
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    neutral

    heh.. cute :P

  • notspecial18
    November 6, 2002
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    neutral

    aw real cute and sweet poem. good job!


  • Lady Mellon Collie
    October 12, 2002
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    excellent

    i thought you said no one commented on your new poem...lol, i loved this...it seems hard for certain people to get it through their head that you love them and would put the world at their feet if they simply asked for it.

  • beauteincendie
    August 31, 2002
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    hehehe poor jen. thanks lurie!


  • Lurie
    August 17, 2002
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    don't touch it!

    Still, poem or not, it's lovely!

  • beauteincendie
    July 27, 2002
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    LOL!!!! f-u-c-k-i-n-g...weeee

  • Cecilia Rose
    July 22, 2002
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    neutral

    thats cute! :) becka and cody sitting in a tree f-u-c... wait am i doing it wrong? lol!

  • beauteincendie
    July 18, 2002
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    :) Thanks guys!

  • Son Of Sun
    July 18, 2002
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    excellent

    WOW, that's very sweet poem.


  • finding myself 84
    July 12, 2002
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    don't touch it!

    :) Very cute!

  • beauteincendie
    July 10, 2002
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    Wow Pam thinks its cute, she's not running away and hurling!!! I'm proud of you Pam!

  • pinkylds
    July 10, 2002
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    neutral

    hehehe i know who your talking about:)ok ok thats so cute


  • whitey4life
    July 8, 2002
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    don't touch it!

    that was really cute. =)
    xSpiderMan1983 on (AIM)

  • beauteincendie
    July 8, 2002
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    LOL you're so cute.


  • July 8, 2002
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    don't touch it!

    great journal entry poem :)

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