Snug in his lawnchair
A sea of blue towels
Flutter on the line
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Written July 7th, 2002
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superb!
this imagery you've depicted sets a magnificent scene, one that reminds me of my childhood... -
Nice Read!
Picture perfect! I can see this clearly. Like the image of 'a sea of blue towels fluttering'!
Good job! 
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vivid
enjoyed this vivid haiku with its enterprising use of images & poetic language - i like the fact that it reads like a peaceful scene but is given extra depth by your exzcellent choice of the adjective 'snug". good one.... -
Great imagination! Very nicely done.
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How magically delightful - - -conjured up summer images for me that I can't quite put my finger on, but made me feel snug as a bug in a rug. Nite!!!
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awesome write! actually, thats my comment under the name 'gigglygirl92'- i forgot to sign off my sister's screenname, lol -
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aaah... sounds like a wonderful spring/ summer day! Thats awesome how u can put such a vivid picture in my minf without the use of many words! great write! -
excellent
I love your Haikus..Keep it up!
~Colleen -
excellent
Brings back memories of other sunny summer days. A delightful piece. -
excellent
easy to snuggle into this vision -
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A sea blue towels fluttering on the line!!!!! wow! How vivid and awesome!!!! -
excellent
tis beautyful blue and snug music, No really very lovly
I off to read more. Thanks fo rcomment on mine -
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Nice ku Susan! You are really good at these! -
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Very well written, Susan! And, blue is my favorite color, so you had me entranced, albiet briefly, but entranced, nonetheless! Love write!;)Kelly -
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Nice haiku. -
excellent
it's hard to capture so much feeling in just seventeen syllables, but you've definitely pulled it off... beautiful!!! -
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Very nice..feel sleepy myself..lol..oh those long summer days.
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Thanks Gayla,Andrew & kaz comments are appreciated!
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Amazing write Blushfulmoon!!!!
Kaz -
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Sheer bliss,
well written Susan.
Andrew -
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Very nice Susan....I like this alot. ~Gayla~
question....we can reduce the size of the pictures? cool, will someone leave a post on my author's page and tell me how to do that? Thank you! -
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But ya did it!
Congrats! .... Now you can work on the sizes!
I knew you could .... just takes practice! ... lol
Hugs
Sammy -
Hey Sammy
Thanks for the help on the photo a little big tho huh LOL
Blessings
Susan (((hugs)))) to ya! -
nyjohn
youre such a romantic thank you
Susan -
LOL Me too Lorraine
Thanks so much for the warm comment
Blessings
Susan -
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Like the snug bit ...lol
Sammy -
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blue is my fav color,,,,,,cool but yet full of life and passion -
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A vivid image set in these words.. Made me smile and push the hair back out of my face. -
Thanks Chasingthe day!!!!!
Blessings
Susan -
don't touch it!
cool poetry that
blows in the summer fine wind -
blue scenes dream away :)
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