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Our Anniversary

We’ve come so far since our first kiss.
I knew that from that day on,
things would never be the same.

I remember the first day you came over my house.
I wasn’t sure how to act or what to do.
The butterflies in my stomach just wouldn’t go away.

It’s hard to believe a year ago today,
we started our relationship.
I did have my doubts about us,
but our love has overcome any obstacles.

Your there for me whenever I need you.
Your sweet words comfort me.
Laying in your arms is my simplest joy.

I love you with all of my heart.
I’m so glad that I shared a year of my life with you.
I can’t wait to share many more years.

Author notes

I wrote this today for my boyfriend, but I'm going to give it to him on our year anniversary on September 28th.
Written September 23rd, 2004

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  • Just4u
    October 26, 2004
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    awww....too too sweet...

    Hugs...Eddy

  • imacrazymonkey
    October 10, 2004
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    Great write, and sooo sweet. Congrats on you guys's anniversary and all.


  • Cara Rose
    September 25, 2004
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    Very sweet Emberly.....while your 1 year anniversary is the 28th of Sept. mine and Roberts is the 28th of Feb.......anyways this is so heartfelt....I'm so glad that you are happy now...besst wishes for a long and lasting future! *hugs*


  • JustAnotherSuicide
    September 24, 2004
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    awww me and my boyfriends 4 month anniversary is on the 28th of this month....i hope it all works out for you and i hope and i know you will always feel this way about him......great write! i feel the same way about my boyfriend richard!

    ttyl

    MBD