As I look around at my family and friends, i feel their pain
I see the hurt and sorrows that each day they gain
I wish I could help take it all away
I wish that for their mistakes i could pay
I see their hearts turned to stone by the world, i cry
Tears flow from my eyes as each stoned heart passes me by
It tears me up inside to see them hold back tears
I hate not being able to take away their fears
Pain be gone, leave them alone, let them be
for your battles not with them, it is with me.
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Wrote this yesterday in math!
Written September 22nd, 2004
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This is a really good poem! great write!
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Nice poem! The rhymeing is very good!I too wish I could take others hurt and pain as I seem to be able to handle more than others. Alot more physical than emotional thoe. lol. -
wow Dev this is awesome. sorry cant coimment alot this is great thought
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Very Good.
A feeling of guilt sometimes makes us want to take on the troubles of the one's we love. Nice emotional piece. Do you dislike math THAT much? Keep em coming. I like your work.
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