In the darkness people call
Struggling to get up
Pulling at your feet as you walk
Wanting to pull you down
They just can't stand it that you made it
While they go down and fail
They want to know how u made it
And how they can prevail
As you watch these people fall
You start to slowly forget
about those who helped along the way
and how they meant so much
now they're nothing at all
But before you forget it all
there's one person that comes
he tells you how much we've helped
and how much we mattered
He brings back the memories
the laughs and tears that you shared
All the things that you knew
and shouldn't forget he told you
All your memories start to come back now
but too vaguely for you to understand
Just a couple memories are left as you are struggling to remember
and not to forget.
Just a moment later and you don't know
Forgot everything
Can't get it straight
We lost you
and its really too bad
Cause right when u started to remember again is when i liked you most
But your left me
and now you don't know
Author notes
this may be a little confusin but its sumthin i wrote because of something that happened.........
Written September 22nd, 2004
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clara was this the poem for the contest we made up?
Edited on Oct 09, 10:33 because 'i had to edit this poem because i spelled we wrong!'. -
DARKWRITE
Love sometimes leaves behind a dark shadow of regret ..yet the promise of renewal is also in that darkness..great piece..emotional malstrom..

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