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Pain

Why must his darkened eyes haunt me?
Throughout the night they look through me!
As if he were real, I could reach out and touch him,
But just as I reach he vanishes.
For he's nothing more than a memory.
One encased in heartache and pain,
But so much happiness, it's still hard to grasp;
Hard to grasp that it's over...
To understand it was finally the end.
For how does one comprehend 'the end',
When something was meant for, well, forever?
Everyone has someone special,
A soul mate most people call them,
And deep within my gut, wrapped around my heart,
I know, it had to have been him
He brought me so much more happiness than anyone else;
Anyone I've found, anyone I'll find.
There can't be another like him.
My heart beat for him alone,
And I suppose, that's the way it shall stay.

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I hate it when I dream of him. It seems so real. He wants me again, needs me - and I need him. Then I awaken alone once more
Written September 22nd, 2004

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  • Ankeeta silver member
    August 17, 2005
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    ooops I hope you are out of this!.....well its indeed a tough time when ones goes through these break offs with spouses ...and yup the memories just seem to be haunting .....but its up to us as I said before that we should come out of it safe...


  • josh-13
    November 16, 2004
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    awwwwww, another good one. yay. um ya, nuff said. your a good writer. You have an awesome way of expression. Your poetry comes from the heart. josh


  • Desire gold member
    September 26, 2004
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    ...I hope this is not what I think this is...
    I am wandering back to AP Land and read this piece...
    Beautiful write of expression

    I must read the others to see what has transpired...
    I wish you the best always....
    Much love~Desire