Said the princess, to the froggie,
Have you always been that green?
because, you look so sad and lonely,
I'm sure things are not as they seem;
Should I kiss you, will that change things,
or will you make me green too?
No, I don't think I will do that
because, I probably will cry;
And if I get green and floppy,
I just wont be nice and dry.
So, I'm off to tell my mummy,
'bout the froggie in the lake;
And, if she says that it's ok, I
shall come back on a date,
but if mum Say's I cant come,
then I'll tell my best friend Sal;
Then she can come and kiss you;
And then you'll end up as pals........
Author notes
Sorry got my silly head on .....
Written September 22nd, 2004
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A contest entry
- Courage of Grace/Kraleigh Grace Burnett by veritas.
307 points, ended October 11, 2004, 14 entries
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lol i like this very much nice write littlefishone
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lol...thank you
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I rather like frogs we have lots as my country is very wet most of the time, so they often creep through the doors and you can hear them flip flopping across the kitchen I have even trained my dogs not to eat them...I sprinkled one that had died with cayenne pepper and put it on the floor...when the dogs found it they started sneezing....so now when a frog comes to visit the dogs take a wide berth
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Aww! How sweet and adorable! The lil frogg is in LOVE! I hope that one of the lil girlies will kiss the cute froggie!!
jessica
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You have come up trumps again and I thank you very much
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cute. interesting. cuz should be because.
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Thank you Dena
I am glad it made you smile...as for the Toad...who knows, could turn into a pumpkin? lol
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This is really cute and sweet. But remember..never kiss a frog, you might end up marrying him..I did, or at least a toad...lol I really enjoy reading your work. It makes me smile
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Thank you
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cute and bouncy. i liked it.
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hahahah...silly indeed, but very nice silly ..i liked this, well done
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This was so adorable great write!
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I like happy poems, I find when I have read too much sadness, I often just toy with these childrens poems as they lighten the spirit , many thanks for your kind words
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Aw dont be so hard on yourself
Glad you liked it
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This poem is really cute, aimed at younder readers, i assume, but thoroughly enjouyable for anyone. I liked it very much, and am now looking forward to your next selection of poems you promote tomorrow, c ya, Dan
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Lol, that was so cutesy and lovely. Aaah, it was marvelous. It flowed so well too, the lines just seemed to bounce from one to another. It really was fantastic, well done
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hahahahhahahah what a cute little piece here..it was so cute....awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
wwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww..this such a good write...i really don't know what to say about it, other than well done...and that it is so cute!! keep it up
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Awww this is so cute, at least this poem is more fairy tale than a sad, heartbroken love poem like many i have read today. Thank you for sharing this poem with all of us, hopefully many more to come from this, many more HAPPY poems. =)
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XoXoXoX With dearest love Angie
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This is very cute and a perfect children's tale/poem. Bet if I was a froggy, I never get any kisses--all I'd get would be rocks tossed at me.
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Glad you liked it sort of fun
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Lol thanks just had my silly head on for a while
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lol, thats hilarious.
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lol, Lynne. This is adorable.
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Thank you I am so pleased that you both enjoyed it
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cute write
Ahh this was cute I just read it to my daughter who is 9.
.She loves it..I like the way you have the question/answer form in this childrens poem
.Nice job..
Thanks for sharing
Lori~
P.S. My daughter thanks you as well
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