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Hard

He laughed quite hard as he pushed me down
to my knees where his cock slapped against my frown.
"Suck me," he said his hand in my hair,
i thought to myself this just isn't fair.
I opened wide and took him in my mouth,
licking and sucking, still with a pout.
He tilted his head back as my tongue undulated,
finally his wishes would be fully sated.
Lips wrapped around his hard as stone dick,
my mouth continued to more than just lick.
on my lips i felt him tense, ready to cum,
his cock was immense.
I turned away to see how he'd feel,
he pushed me down hard and said "Now kneel."
I got right down quick on all fours,
my pussy was shaved and I said "it's yours."
He impaled my warm slit all at one time,
I couldn't make a sound, i had almost whined.
He felt so good undulating within me,
I cried out "Harder please!" so desperate-ly
He obliged and whispered "I'll fuck you raw!"
I couldn't breath hoping he'd give me much more.
At a moment too soon he wasted his energy,
This would be one for him, none for me.
He stood up wiping off his cock,
"Did you think I care? Just wanted to fuck."

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Written September 22nd, 2004

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  • My Seven Miseries
    November 12, 2004
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    and another excellent one by you. great job, keep it up maaan

  • InMyWorldImCool
    October 13, 2004
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    8.6 out of ten

    this sounds like me and my boyfriend, ill show him, he'll love it.

  • Likeaglove
    September 22, 2004
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    Nice one! One of the better ones on here! greeeeeeeat

  • StillReal
    September 22, 2004
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    Oooh! Baby you turn me on. Nice write keep up the good work.

  • UrBanWildcat
    September 22, 2004
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    Very nice ;)

    Wow Krissy. Great poem and it gets very hot towards the end. I can't help feeling that you put the oral bit there just to smite me lol.

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