Tumescent jawline
Pounding of a sledgehammer
A Molar Abcess
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OUCH
Written September 22nd, 2004
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sounds as if you might need a cruise on a root canal, with the voga boat man of nitrous oxide singing you into a blissful state as he scrapes the sides of the cavity in which you writhe and brightens your journey through life....Artis
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A very interesting and creative way to describe a toothache. You bring a new voice to describing such a situation because you don't just say in the poem itself "my tooth hurts", you take it to a whole other level by adding in a colorful use of words and an interesting way of placing them down on the page. A very intricate portrayal of the everday. Very much enjoyed.
much love,
James
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Ouch indeed...no fun at all....
Hugs...Eddy -
perfect
Lori you could not have summed it up any better than that. I could not think of any more clear and precise reminder of just that...............pain pain may we never have to go through it again. Excellent I almost went to the medcine cabinet for some aspirin, Excellent piece Thank You KeeperOfTheCats -
LOL ..tinfoil..Damn my brother told me once to do that
now I begin to cringe..Thanks for the comment and ENJOY your reynolds foil...hey if you have any wax paper email it to me I am making Caramel apples 
Stay Well
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It really is just like they say:
"Abcess makes the fart go Honda"
well, I'm off to chew on some tinfoil.
-Chris.
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