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Unfair

I hate how you ignore me for a long time,
then act likes it's all fuckin' fine,
and you tell me how much you care...
but it's so fucking unfair.

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Written September 21st, 2004

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  • That One Guy
    September 22, 2004
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    very powerful but short
    good job! (hope to see you add to it =))