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Torn Apart

I know that you miss her,
you have everyday since she went,
I know you still want her,
but now it causes me torment.

I would never tell you to stop,
never would I tell you,
but it feel's like my heart I let drop,
cause I wish you'd love me too..

It's a feeling I can't fight,
I know that it's wrong,
but crying is what I've done tonight,
wondering if my heart i misled all along.

I feel so selfish...
but to have your love is what i wish.
It's not necessary though,
cause I'll always be there in your times of woe,
cause I'll always be theres as your friend,
all the way until the very end.

I feel torn apart.

Author notes

not good..it sux...but i needed to write something....
Written September 21st, 2004

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