I can’t wait,
M’love
I can’t wait
…
I can’t wait,
to gaze into your eyes,
as I feel the love you feel,
for me,
once again
…
I can’t wait,
M’love
I can’t wait
…
I can’t wait,
to hear your voice,
as you speak the words,
“I love you”
as I hear the love you feel
for me,
once again
…
I can’t wait,
M’love
I can’t wait
…
I can’t wait,
to take you into my arms,
as I feel the love you feel
for me,
once again
…
I can’t wait,
M’love
I can’t wait
…
I can’t wait,
to see you gaze into my eyes,
as you see the love I feel
for you,
once again
…
I can’t wait,
M’love
I can’t wait
…
I can’t wait,
for you to hear the words I speak,
“I love you”
as you hear the love I feel
for you,
once again
…
I can’t wait,
M’love
I can’t wait
…
I can’t wait,
for you to take me into your arms,
as you feel the love I feel
for you,
once again
…
I can’t wait,
M’love
I can’t wait
…
I can’t wait,
for us to be together,
as one,
once again
…
Hand in hand
…
Eye to eye
…
Face to face
…
Heart to heart
…
I can’t wait,
M’love
I can’t wait
…
© Jonathan Wikkins October 15th 2001
Revised March 7, 2008
All Rights Reserved
Author notes
Written October 15th, 2001
In a list
A contest entry
- The Face You Love Most by Shapla.
440 points, ended February 23, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Love by a-face-in-the-crowd.
450 points, ended February 7, 2008, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
1 - 10 of 10
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Oo i liked this alot. I thought the repetition worked really well, and I loved the running theme of senses throughout the poem! Amazing!
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sweet and simple. But it paints the face you love most very beautifully. Nice background. Thanks for the entry and good luck in the contest
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a very unique poem, i like it. the repetition keeps it flowing, gives it that unique feeling. quite oringinal. blessed be.
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Wow! This is an old one I haven't seen before. -sigh- sooo much has happened in the 2 years since you posted this...but I understand the thoughts about being unable to wait...and yet, we must. -sigh-
Beautiful words/thoughts here...
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Great write here a very up lifting one to . i think that you really took your time to write this one to get it just right great poem thank you for shareing
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excellent
this is soooo sweet. It gives me that misty dreamy feeling....this is a great feeling, and whoever its written for is a very lucky person =)
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Yes this is very original! nicely done !
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Bizzare phrasing...hey,it's original AND romantic!
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i love the uniqueness.....(sp?...lol i think i spelled it right,it just looks weird) very differant from your general standard everyday poem, which is good! thats adds a lil 'Pizzaz' 2 it, its a very commendable piece of work :)
keep up the good work!
Angie
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way different style then everyone eklse, maybe thats what makes it so special?
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