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Words from an open mind pt 4

Missing image
crystal clear
ocean blue
feelings coming
over you

on the run
someone you love
can it be
he is for me

clearly spoken
in the night
everything
seems alright

over yonder
thru the trees
forever together
you and me

~Lady Raven~

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Not sure, just came out.
Written September 20th, 2004

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  • owlishhunter
    February 26, 2007
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    Very, very pretty...but for the running...sometimes that's just how it goes though. Great write!

  • Omegawolf
    September 21, 2004
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    Charmful and cheerful

    Love the picture, I could almost chant out this poem. Seems like a love chant that you could repeat and repeat, and make it come true. Probably like casting a spell, looks like you charmed me all over again..good write


  • Naughtygrlred
    September 20, 2004
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    It's very pretty.