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As She Paints A Song (For Joni)

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She paints with bandaged feathers
colours from a Glory pallette,    
strokes each painful stillness
transposed to joy.

Elegant countenance-
and oh--so beautiful,
she’ll forfeit dance and wine
in a servant’s cloak;
the silver lining, inside out

She leads the children and challenged
from her reduced world, spilling over
in extended melody.

To that note, Yeshua sings-
and because she surrenders,
He transformed her earth at
heaven's first floor,
and gladly
raised its roof.

www.joniandfriends.org/

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You've just GOT to meet this lady through her stories, and the movie that you might have also seen years ago!
Written September 20th, 2004

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  • July 1, 2006
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    i think you did very well on this

  • princess777
    August 1, 2005
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    Good job!


  • myrataal silver member
    October 10, 2004
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    Precious

    Dearest Dianne

    I do not know Joni, neither do I know her work, but through your very lovely and descriptive poem a clear image formed in my mind. How precious you are in your praise of your fellow men! How refined you presentation of this praise. I loved the wordings (He transformed her earth at/heaven's first floor,/and gladly/raised its roof), and I loved the background. Such a gentle, yet bubbly soul you are!



    Myra


  • Sherry gold member
    October 4, 2004
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    Cookie, This is really a lovely piece and beautifuly written from your heart......Very nicely done hon.....You painted a canvas here with words and a portrait of art with love expressing a persons soul you've reflected them in a lovely way.....Love,Sherry
    Edited on Oct 04, 9:35 p.m. because ''.


  • catz Moderators member
    October 3, 2004
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    This sounds like an amazing woman, I've bookmarked her website and will check it out.
    Your poem for her is wonderful. And I see that most of the readers are familiar with her already....my turn
    A very nice tribute, Di
    Luv and s
    Dee


  • Manicmuze
    October 2, 2004
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    What a lovely tribute... such beautiful words.
    Nice :-)
    ~ Wendy


  • pentopaper
    October 1, 2004
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    What a wonderful tribute to such a deserving lady! I'm so happy to see you were able to get it to her. How honored she must have felt to receive such a beautiful gift from a writer so blessed with talent! Very well done!! Karen


  • CookieZeal Greeters member
    October 1, 2004
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    awhhh..thank you. I've missed you. Where've you been??


  • Mary O gold member
    October 1, 2004
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    Your words are music, Cookie. Such a lovely tribute.

    ~Mary O


  • tWisTeD sMiLe
    September 27, 2004
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    this is wonderful! although i do not no who this woman is, im sure she disrves this wonderful piece!!

  • CookieZeal Greeters member
    September 22, 2004
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    Yes. Bonnie! I certainly DID send it to her. Thank you for reading and the suggestion. Glad to see you!

    Warmly, CookieZeal/DB


  • BonnieQ silver member
    September 22, 2004
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    This is a wonderful tribute, Cookie. Perhaps, you should find a way to get it to her. It just might be that day that she needs a spiritual lift and this certainly would give it to her.

    Well done, hon. Love and hugs, BonnieQ

  • CookieZeal Greeters member
    September 21, 2004
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    Oh, thank you for your read and HONEST critiques. I always appreciate and consider them. IN this instance, it is merely to reflect the glory of the Lord who directs her path in spite of her disability


  • X Cinderella X
    September 21, 2004
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    Wonderful!! I clicked on this as I'm currently reading one of Joni's books so it caught my eye. A very well written and expressed piece. Wonderful words, superb write!

  • jp carruzo
    September 21, 2004
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    great

    this is lovely. but i have to admit. i didnt get the exact feel/msg of the poem. well, i guess thats the beauty of it. i liked your choice of words. i think it comlemented your relaxing background. keep writing.


  • Circuitsboard
    September 21, 2004
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    It is an amazing feat, and she is an amazing woman.
    Great picture of her, as well. Your words are well chosen, well written, and the piece is well done.
    I applaud.


  • kjd
    September 20, 2004
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    AWESOME tribute!

    Cookie,

    I knew right away this was about joni eareckson tada, a powerful witness for Christ. Very soft, beautifully illustrated piece you've painted with your words--BRAVA!

    (((HUGS))) and love, karla.

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