There is a decision I have to make
do I stay with him, take his silence?
Love I feel for him is still intense
the silence is more than I can take.
When he was busy I waited patiently
hoping maybe this will be the day
he will come, oh how I always pray!
Feel him touch my face, constantly.
only it's not enough, too much pain,
too much hurt, when I beg him to speak,
is it too much to ask for? just to speak!
that's all it takes, to feel happy again.
The decision to leave him is heartbreaking
I must decide before this step I'm taking.
Author notes
I connect with him every day, I feel his kisses on my face
it's the silence that get's to me.
Written September 19th, 2004
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YES MAKE A DECISION THAT WIL NOT AFECT U EITHER OK DON`T LEAVE HIM AMKE A CHANCE FOR HIM MAKE ALOWANCE FOR HIM HE WIL COME BACK TO U THS IS AN ARWSOME WRITING IF I MAY SAY
HAVE U EVER SWRIITEN A NONSES POEM I KNOW IT IS FUNNY BUT THERE ARE SUCH KIND OF POEMS TOO -
This is beautiful....truely...Thanks so much for entering
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Thank you pharoh for your kind comment, i truly appreciate you dropping by-jennifer
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well-done
great write i loved the emotion and underlying sdness a great topic and i simply loved it new fan right here -
5 stars *****
.. your love is so intense dear.. grrrrrr .. i am a little jealous too.. as there is no one to write a poem for me... 
on this poem.. this is nice write dear.. i enjoyed the poem.. few rhyming lines added more pleasure in reading this poem.. the way you have described your tempting hear tfor him purely and surely states your true love for him...
i just wanted to confirm the meaning inside the last two lines ( see i have to be honest to you if i have to understand this poem properly )
it may be states you want to leave him.. am i right??
take cares and have a nice time dear.. just keep it up my nice dear jennifer... your humble little friend..
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.... - vic ( who else? )
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