I waited
for you
waited for you to save me
from myself
Where are you now to light the way
through my affliction
Wasn't it you who said
you would catch me
if I fell
Wasn't it you who said
you would hear me
if I screamed
Wasn't it you who said
you would care
if I cried
Well I fell
but you didn't catch me
I screamed
but you didn't hear me
I cried
but you didn't care
I waited...
but now you've become a memory
thats slowly
*fading away*
Author notes
blah... I dont know, I have so much going through my head right now its just one big mess, and when I wrote, this came out, not my best, in fact it sucks, but i dont really care!
Written September 19th, 2004
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wow awesome picture
and great write
remember that u deserve a great person
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i so wish i could be there with you.....i wish we could have come to steal you from Canada too i'm really sorry it never happened, i hope you have fun in New Zealand, and i hope you can come back and visit some day
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Thanks for the commment, it means a lot!
-M
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oh man, i don't think it sucks, i think it's pretty good. well, great. there are awesome feelings in this. and it is raw and blunt, to the point if i could say. good write.
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thats a good poem i feel like that 2 also
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Thanks I dont even realise that they are blunt when im writing them, but then after I notice, But I've tried not to be, it just doesnt work for me, so i just write what comes out!
thanks for youe comment!
-M
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is this the product of your writers block from the other day? cause if so... way to go breaking down that wall! if not, this still kicks ass. i really like it. i love how you can be so blunt about what your poems are without sounding like your 12.
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