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Second Thoughts: Messed up Contradictions

"I wish you could come over tonight, my mom's going out for a lil'"


               .:.The feelings come back in an instant.
                 Is this really happening, is he talking to me again?.:.


    "You gotttttta call me this weekend."
       =No, it can't be him.



                    I have waited for this day for awhile,
               thought we were done for sure.
           I cannot begin to express,
     All the feelings I feel again.



A repeat in history and it feels good.
A second chance, here at my feet.
I can't wait to be held by you again.



Hold Up..................

                             What are you doing to yourself,
                              Are you sure you want to risk it??
                                Just another stab, and this time might
                                   be deeper.


"I wanna BE with you again,
I don't know what happened,
 But I want to get with you soooo bad"


          Oh boy, I feel the same for you
          I can't wait to taste those lips again
          Or to fall so deep into the words of your SwEeT tAlK*




*Wait a second, WAIT a second..*

             NO, no, NO, no
                               
                                       NOT HAPPENING!



remember what happened last time,

  Shit WILL fuck up again

They'll find out and you'll be sorry



                                  "I reallllly hope this doesnt fuck up,
                                      i CANT wait!"
                            his words ring through my soft head again.


And I cannot wait either,
I've been waiting for this for so long
Finally your back....




                     *-NO STOPPING ME TONIGHT-*


  my *decision* is made
                                                    +i live once+


and this is what i'm gunna do..........

Author notes

haha i wanted to see if i could write a poem that ppl could relate to about love, is this kinda what ppl are going through sometimes??
Written September 19th, 2004

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  • Flame Raven
    November 2, 2004
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    wow...u must love whomever a ton...and i like how u wrote it. if flows very well

  • erin1411
    September 28, 2004
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    awww meaghan... holy freaking crap, i knew you liked him but i never knew how much!!! you know i support every decision you make, and this time DONT HIDE IT FROM ME!


  • knots untangled
    September 20, 2004
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    oh girl, you and i are going through basically the same thing, i wrote a poem about ti just a few minutes ago....but i like yuo're set up, its unique, i lvoe unique things it makes me all happy inside, and its true, you only live once!
    -meg

  • Allison1212
    September 19, 2004
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    hmmmmmmm wellll this looks a little formilar lol! hahah this is good... and i have a feeling i know who it's about... and you did a great job. different, but very good... nice job.


  • painted veil
    September 19, 2004
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    well no one ecer said poetry couldn't be a little obscure. The point is that the reader understood what you were saying and what happened. I actually liked how it felt like three voices in one poem, it was trippy but still a wicked read.

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